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bayi

i enjoyed the poem. sorry i didn't comment earlier because i did not know that the poem was posted. and when you directed the link to me, i was away for a few days.

i like the strong imagery and how the sea relates to you and vice versa. i like the subtle transition how this moves on to flashbacks of thoughts about treading on the water. the lines progress in a feeling of comfort of a contented person lost in blissful thinking.

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